Hi there -
I am so happy that you have taken this on! I think it is so important to convey the message of the architect's importance to the public. With all of the HGTV shows and real estate investment seminars out there, people are really doubtful of our value.
In line with that, I have a few issues with the video that you have posted. As an architect, I am sure you will take them in the spirit of friendly critique in which they are intended.
1. The authoritative architect is always portrayed as male - you include a cute girl Asian intern and the Team, who are all female and all clearly junior to the balding guy with the glasses, and are all seated, passive, while the men are standing up and doing things. Around 2:00, there is a whole bunch of narration that calls the architect He over and over. Then you show a bedraggled female client (who looks more like a student) who has made wrong decisions, and then another middle-aged woman who has made poor choices, suffering while her angry husband threatens to hit her from behind. This borders on offensive. Please be more circumspect. You might, for example, start the video with a woman's hand holding the pencil? Or have a woman's name in the seal? Or allow a man to be the idiot client once?
2. At 2:40, when you are discussing the effect of the architect's involvement in the outcome, the imagery (the pile of cash) when you are talking about your most valuable asset (presumably a house?) is confusing. While money is important and houses are important investments, they are not important investments primarily because of money. They are important investments because they loom so large among the things that determine our quality of life. The real power of architecture has so much to do with this qualitative aspect of things, and real estate investment so often prostitutes it. I think it is important not to add to that confusion.
3. At 2:49, the house shown is controversial in its architectural value, so, we wonder exactly which side of the equation you are illustrating? Again, when you talk about the Bottom Line right afterwards - see #2 above.
4. I would say, "...mistakes happen, money is lost, and the client is left with a result that fails to live up to its potential." That is, I think, the real problem.
Thanks very much!
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Kate Svoboda-Spanbock AIA, CID
Principal
HERE Design and Architecture
Los Angeles CA
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Original Message:
Sent: 06-28-2013 18:47
From: David Andreozzi
Subject: CRANtv ' Check out our pilot video
It was brought up both at the forum in Denver, and though these posts, that Doug and I did a pretty poor job with the gender neutrality in the wording of the script. I plead guilty 100%, and that will be addressed in all future videos. We may try and update this video when we get funding with that change, and some others.
Thanks to everyone that reached out with the polite constructive criticisms.This is a learning process for us!
Dave
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David Andreozzi AIA
Barrington RI
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